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- 2014 December 16 Tuesday --- Opinion Paragraph 1st Revision
Posted by : Febrisaintshidiq
Tuesday, December 23, 2014
1. Sources:
2. Main ideas:
Applying the emergency call center in Indonesia is tremendously needed.
3. Supporting Details:
a. emergency call center should be easy to remember and brief.
b. emergency call center is accessible
c. emergency call center can detect callers’ locations
4. 1st Draft:
a. emergency call center should be easy to remember and brief.
b. emergency call center is accessible
c. emergency call center can detect callers’ locations
4. 1st Draft:
Indonesia Needed Emergency Call Center
9-1-1 is the emergency telephone number and has been
successfully applied in the United States and Canada. However, Indonesia has
not had the emergency call center. There are three obvious reasons to apply the
emergency call center of the same type as 9-1-1 in Indonesia. First, emergency
call center consists of unique numbers, usually three easy remembered numbers
for making people facile to call helps. Second, emergency call center is
accessible. In 2013 Indonesia had around 342.000 criminalities and 100.106
accidents (regional.kompasiana.com and bps.go.id). By this emergency call
center people can ask helps freely, including police, ambulance, and
firefighters, although their cell-phones locked. Third,
emergency call center can detect callers’ locations. Cell-phones will transmit
signals to the closest cell tower which determines the location. In conclusion,
applying the emergency call center in Indonesia is tremendously needed.