Posted by : Febrisaintshidiq Monday, December 8, 2014

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2. Main ideas:
Applying 9-1-1 emergency telephone number in Indonesia is tremendously needed.

3. Supporting Details:
a.       9-1-1 is easy to remember
b.      9-1-1 is accessible
c.      9-1-1 can detect callers’ locations
d.      9-1-1 is practical and free

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9-1-1

            9-1-1 is the emergency telephone number for the North American Numbering, it is intended for use in emergency circumstances only (Wikipedia). The emergency circumstances include criminalities, accidents, and fire. 9-1-1 has been successfully applied in the United States and Canada. Indonesia has not had this emergency telephone number. In fact, in 2013 Indonesia had around 100.106 accidents and 342.000 criminalities happened, one of the biggest in the world. There are four obvious reasons to apply the emergency telephone number of the same type as 9-1-1 in Indonesia. First, 9-1-1 is easy to remember. Calling assistances is still difficult because people do not know the emergency number to call. 9-1-1 is well-known unique emergency number, easy to remember, and brief, make people facile to call assistances. Second, 9-1-1 is accessible. People always bring their cell-phones wherever they are. Cell-phones can call 9-1-1 although they are locked. Third, 9-1-1 can detect callers’ locations. When callers do not know where they are, cell-phones will transmit a signal to the nearest cellular tower.  Then the signal will be transmitted to the closest 9-1-1 center, as determined by the location of the cell tower which receives the incoming call. The assistance will reach the location as fast as it can. Fourth, 9-1-1 is practical and free, because fees are collected by local telephone and wireless carriers through monthly surcharges on customer telephone bills. Only pushing 9-1-1, callers freely can ask assistances they are needed, include police, ambulance, and fire. By this emergency telephone number, handling criminality will be easier, victims are taken care quickly, and police, paramedics, as well as firefighters’ performances will be maximal. In conclusion, applying 9-1-1 emergency telephone number in Indonesia is tremendously needed.


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